i think you will admit, sir, that the quality of my work during the last two years has been such that my services could not easily be replaced. i speak more in pain than in anger when i say that it has been a matter of profound surprise to me to note that you have not seen fit to acknowledge my value to the firm in some substantial way. i think i may say that i have been patient. i have continued my efforts with unremitting zeal, and i think i may flatter myself that my endeavors have not been without result. i have here, carefully tabulated, a memorandum of the increased profits in my department during the last twelve months, due in great part to my careful management. i am sorry to have to force you into a decision, but i think i owe it to myself to say candidly that unless you see the matter in the same way that i do i shall feel obliged to deprive the firm of my services.

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if you are not too busy, sir, there is one other matter—in fact, the truth of the matter in fact is exactly—well, sir, i was precisely wondering whether—of course i know this is a bad time—indeed i have been very pleased to see business picking up a bit lately, and i am sure my own department has been—but to tell you the truth, sir, i have been wondering—of course it is just as you think best and i wouldn't think of insisting, but after all, perhaps i have made a mistake in mentioning it, but i was thinking that possibly you might bear in mind the idea of a possible future raise in salary at some future time.